Short sketch written for a “Creative Writing” class. The exercise was to describe in detail a historical person doing something mundane.
One summer day Sir Isaac Newton was enjoying the sun in his garden. He sat by his favourite apple tree, savouring the warm breeze upon his face. Suddenly, he heard a thump nearby and saw a round object rolling slowly toward him. Upon taking a closer look Sir Newton realised that he was looking at an apple that just fell from the apple tree above. “My oh my”, he thought, “that could have hit me on my head, it could!”
It was positively the largest apple Isaac had ever seen. One thing he loved was apples. He loved that each sort of apple would surprise him with a new sensation of taste. Isaac knew that this one would not disappoint him. He stretched his hand to reach the apple, but realised he could not do so without moving his whole body. Lazily, without getting up, he pushed himself forward until his hand could grab the fruit.
He brought the apple close to his face, and examined it meticulously. He rotated the apple very deliberately, appreciating its smooth texture pressing against his skin, and squinting to see the minute details of its surface. “It is a beauty!”, Isaac concluded. He had always been fascinated by nature and its creations. For a few short seconds Isaac contemplated not eating the apple after all, so amazed he was.
Finally, with one decisive motion Isaac brought the apple up to his mouth and let his teeth sink into it. He took a large bite out of the apple and began to chew unhurriedly. He tasted the delicious fresh pulp and let the taste linger before taking another bite. With the next bite, Sir Newton closed his eyes and his mouth shaped into a smile. He leaned back against the apple tree and proceeded to take more bites out of the juicy fruit. As the apple slowly diminished in size, Isaac’s smile grew wider. He stretched out his legs and was by now lying down, with his head firmly propped up against the tree.
Once Isaac was finished with the apple, he carefully placed what was left of the fruit by his side. He rolled his tongue inside his mouth to collect the remaining bits of his tasty treat. He let out a loud smacking sound to show his appreciation, and then slowly rose up. His legs have been failing him of late, so this action came with much effort. Pondering upon the gravity of his physical condition, Sir Isaac Newton went on about his day.
7 thoughts on “Newton’s Apple”
Great Job!! I enjoy your style very much. I remember when we were kids and even from this story i can tell, it’s very You!!! You’re gonna write great things 😉 Good luck with the blog!!!
Heya, thanks a lot! And thanks for joining up – I’ll try and deliver some more of that greatness for your reading pleasure soon 😉
You did a nice job with the story. It made me crave apples. I think Sir Isaac Newton would have enjoyed it too. He was a good person to choose, and his mundane day was brilliant.
Thanks for the feedback – glad you’ve enjoyed it. My plan is to write more fiction – smaller pieces or potentially something sizable. So stay tuned!
As I read the above the only thing on my mind was- “Now he is gonna put in how the idea of gravity struck Newton”. I was surprised pleasantly when the story didn’t turn out to be predictable.
Yeah, I wanted to play on the stereotypical story :)…glad you were pleasantly surprised!
One of my favourites :o) !!!